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(If you’re looking for a more prescriptive copywriting Micro-Course, please check out Master Fascinations and Conversion Class.)
This, instead, is a collection of copywriting, writing, and persuasion tips authored by 100s of copywriters and marketers from around the world. Each tip stands on it’s own, independent from the others.
It’s intended to be a source of knowledge and inspiration for copywriters at every level.
It’s also a networking tool, as each tip links to the author’s LinkedIn profile. So if you have a question about a tip, just connect with the author and start a conversation.
Maybe you’ll learn something new, or hire someone, or yourself get a job.
In any case… enjoy, folks. 🙂
Day #1 (of 9)
Simple, 75-word copywriting tip:
Double-tap “Enter” every 1-3 sentences 👇
Pressing “Enter” twice creates space, emptiness.
But just because a space is empty doesn't mean it lacks purpose.
Just like photographers and designers use negative space to create a focal point, writers can use white space to create emphasis and draw attention to something important.
White space also makes copy look less intimidating, more readable. It structures the message in a polished, elegant frame that invites The Reader in.
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Submitted by Eddie Shleyner
Also, don't use too many fonts, colors and sizes. Too many bold, italics and underline in one page will give your readers a headache.
It's not really a copywriting tip but people use it to emphasize and just make a mess of their copy.
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Submitted by Irit Levi
Never sacrifice clarity for the sake of cleverness.
If your “creative” message is difficult to understand, it’s missing the mark.
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Submitted by Tiffany Ingle
Aesthetics matter.
Use a font type that's easy on the eyes — clear and big enough.
Play with variety — bolding, italicizing, underlining, bulleting and indenting text helps.
Often, good content is lost/missed because of clumsy formatting. A visually appealing piece certainly grabs the reader's attention.
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Submitted by Henna Malik
After you write your first draft, go do something else. Grab a coffee, have a hallway chat, just something else.
Come back and you'll be more apt to find your grammatical errors and easy improvements.
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Submitted by Marcy Comer
When writing copy, build your copy around just one major promise.
You don't need to sprinkle promises around your copy, build on one major promise. (This way you won’t overwhelm your reader.)
And make sure the promise is clear to your reader.
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Submitted by Ola Ojebola
Adding "which is" can make you sound more highfalutin.
"What's that in your hand?" to "What is that which is in your hand?"
Or "when the moon hits your eye like a big pizza pie, that's amore" to "that which is amore."
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Submitted by Steve Czajkowski
My college drumline instructor would tell the group, “For the notes to make sense, you have to give the rests their full value. Don’t rush.”
It’s musical advice that I think translates well to copywriting.
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Submitted by Liz Feezor
I always break up the document into different sections before I start writing it. I make pointers — usually in the form of questions — that help remind me of exactly what each paragraph should focus on, along with the ideal number of words in each paragraph.
This way the writing does not end up being too long-winded in unnecessary sections!
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Submitted by Jovie Benson Lyngdoh
Copy isn’t always written or verbal.
Images and design impart the emotion needed to spark interest or impart your meaning. When copywriters understand design and desire, they can give designers clear instruction and work together to create something that drives results (rather than something that’s just there for the sake of filling space).
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Submitted by Ari Rule
That little voice in your head that talksfasterwhenIwrotethis and SHOUTED WHEN I WROTE THIS? It's your best friend. Listen to it and use it to write dynamic copy that makes people feel like they're listening to you speak.
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Submitted by Connor Kunz
Put your writing on the chopping block.
Plan on removing at least 30% of the words from whatever you write, regardless of how long it is initially.
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Submitted by Connor Kunz
To engage the reader scrolling the feed or opening the email, always start strong – "in medias res".
1) Hi Michal, I hope this email finds you well. I'm a sales representative at the My Office Supplies Co. and I would like to let you know that we are providing the best quality copy paper in the market.
VS
2) Hi Michal, run out of copy paper? No worries, we've got you covered.
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Submitted by Michal Tomek
A study called the Consequences of Erudite Vernacular Utilized Irrespective of Necessity: Problems with Using Long Words Needlessly (amazing name, I know) showed that people view you as more intelligent if you explain a concept simply.
There's no need to make things complicated. If anything, this could ostracise potential customers from using your client's services.
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Submitted by Jasmine Batchellor-Sequeira
Splitting a bulky paragraph in half is a service to the reader.
Long paragraphs simply signal a heavier load of message and therefore look less friendly. The writer starts a new paragraph where he can to make the text from the start appear easier to read.
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Submitted by Steve Czajkowski
Your product is not the hero of the story. Your customer is!
Your product is simply the tool that empowers your customer to become the hero in their own story by helping them overcome an obstacle or achieve a new status.
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Submitted by Laura Sutton
Don't make your copy about your company.
Make it about the reader and the incredible benefit they will get from the product/service you are selling.
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Submitted by Luis Molina Sanchez
I like to do the Steven Spielberg test.
If I gave my copy to a director would they know how to set up the shot for a movie? Do my words give enough description or is there a disconnect between what my copy says and what my reader pictures?
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Submitted by Abby J. Wilson
Consider end reader emotions. Humans are emotion-driven. 80% of success in life is human relations. Your words have the power to move people. Use them.
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Submitted by Richard Mort
My tip: Do proper research.
What does that mean? Get a spreadsheet, and find your target audience online. Write those hopes, dreams, struggles, and problems down. Write also what WORKS for them. How do you find them?
Reddit forums. Competitor reviews. Twitter discussions. Blog post comments. Amazon Reviews. YouTube comments.
And then, do this. It's so simple, and it will make your copy much better: Use their language (e.g., their words, sentences) in your copy. Your target audience will feel more connected to your copy.
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Submitted by Bruce De Meester
Read your copy out loud, if possible. Let someone listen to it.
The ears sometimes pick up disjoints in your copy that the eyes don't.
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Submitted by Akinwunmi Bello
Never assume you'll remember that brilliant idea in a few minutes. Take two seconds to write it down now. Or record a voice note. Too many good ideas die on arrival due to lack of documentation.
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Submitted by Camille Trent
If your copy seems convoluted, messy, too long, or unclear, start by deleting the word 'that'. Removing the word 'that' can often lead to even more clear and concise sentences.
"We know that you are a hardworking professional."
can be:
"We know you are a hardworking professional."
or better yet:
"You are a hardworking professional."
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Submitted by Brittany K. King
Never start with a blank page. Start with an outline.
I always pop an outline into the doc even if I end up changing it. That way, I’m not staring at the dreaded blank screen. It could be as simple as writing out: problem > solution > features / benefits > cta.
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Submitted by John Lombard
Here’s a formula that makes it super-easy to come up with a winning headline: I = B + C
Which means to generate ‘Interest’ from readers, combine the ‘Benefit’ with ‘Curiosity’ in your headline — and you’re sure to get a winner.
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Submitted by Ibrahim Umoru
When I edit copy, the very first thing I do is separate each sentence into its own paragraph.
This makes it easier to see fluff sentences that can't stand on their own two feet.
Then, in my notes, I'll outline what the relationship is between each sentence (i.e. A connects to B because [problem] creates [agitation]).
There is usually some gap in logic or skipped step in the story that comes to light.
But it all starts with making the friends with the enter button.
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Submitted by Christian Schick
Em dashes are your friends!
Especially when you’re writing in a more informal, conversational way. They function with a lot of variety and can help to differ the effect of the sentence depending on how you use them (can be used instead of colons, semicolons, commas, or parenthesis).
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Submitted by Helene Cohn
Read your copy from the last word of the last sentence back to the first one. This helps to detect mistakes more effectively.
This technique helps to break brain biases. When we work on something for a long time, we might not see small typos or errors because our brain fixes them without us noticing. But if we read the copy backwards, our brain doesn't recognize our text and all the errors pop up.
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Submitted by Francesca Cappellini
The best way to top off competitor analysis is by checking the reviews and complaints regarding the product.
Before you start writing your copy, go through your competitors reviews. Pay attention to the complaints. These are the gaps you can fill in with your copy. By writing copy that can address those complaints you're creating space for yourself in a very saturated market.
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Submitted by Parthiva Mewawala
Day #2 (of 9)
Simple, 107-word copywriting tip:
Use contrast to control The Reader’s eyes 👇
For example...
Bolding benefits in your text will almost certainly get them seen and read.
Seems like an obvious technique but I often find it underused (or even completely overlooked).
In fact, in-text formatting of any kind (e.g., italics; underlining; #hashtags; CAPITALIZATION; backlinks; emojis 👈), used sparingly, will capture The Reader’s attention almost immediately.
This happens because our brains are evolutionarily hardwired to notice anything different or unusual, anything in stark contrast to its surroundings.
This trait helped early humans see their prey in the forest.
And now you can use it to help modern humans see your words on the internet.
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Submitted by Eddie Shleyner
Figure out the one, strongest emotional 'hot button' directly connected to the primary benefit that your ideal buyer will enjoy once they have bought your offer.
Build your entire message around the various dimensions and aspects of that one thing.
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Submitted by Timothy “Sully” Sullivan
While writing copy, try short sentences with brevity as often as possible.
But for instance if you have one long sentence, always use Ellipsis...
And convert it into two short ones.
P.S. Write for readers with 7th grade mindset.
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Submitted by Deepak Chawla
Salespeople should be reading these tips.
So much of selling is written, and today's short attention spans demand that salespeople write crisp, compelling emails and proposals. Good copywriters know how to do that.
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Submitted by Brendan McAdams
Read other people’s copy, deeply.
Notice the mechanics of how your favorite newsletter or brand set up a call to action. Read poetry, feel the feels, and try to emulate the emotional transfer between author and reader. Find nuance in newspaper headlines and leads.
Great writing is everywhere (one read through these comments confirms that). Slowing down to appreciate it — and understand what makes it slap -- has improved my own writing tremendously.
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Submitted by Bruce Fryer
Being a perfectionist often holds me back. It’s taken a good while to accept that my first draft won’t be award-winning.
Tip? Write shit. Brain splatter over the page, don’t worry about grammar, use basic descriptive words if you have to. Your story will still be in there and you can finesse it after a cuppa.
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Submitted by Eppie Shepherd
Try very hard not to publish a sentence with a hendiadys* modifying another hendiadys. If you do, you’ve just interrupted your reader’s regularly scheduled comprehension of prose with a “table” they must construct in their heads.
I don’t think they’ll appreciate it.
*Hendiadys: a writing feature identifying an abstract concept, with contributing ideas x and y, as “x and y” instead of “x-ish y” or “x-ly y” (or better yet, single word z if you can find one). You may see it with lists of 3 or more ideas in really gnarly cases.
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Submitted by Alexander Dave McMath
Get your user experience right, and your marketing will write itself.
Look to your customer testimonials for inspiration. The features that resonate with one buyer may provide the content/messaging that persuades and interests another buyer from your ideal customer group.
If someone says they loved X and it saved them 4 hours on a process, use that in emails, on social, on your site. That's the kind of social proof your audiences are looking for.
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Submitted by Natalie Tate
Read it out loud to see if it flows.
It's completely different from reading it in your head.
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Submitted by Mark Hibbitts
Your copy should be focused on meeting your reader where they are in their own story.
And your copy should move them forward, in a positive direction, after reading it.
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Submitted by Cuyler Callahan
When you write for the spoken word -- you need the spread to catch cadence and pause. A paragraph really has no place to go with well written fast driven speech. Every line must be a zinger. This is scripting.
On the other hand, speech that narrates or orates wants bigger chunks. Gettysburg Address was I think five paragraphs with lots of punchy sentences.
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Submitted by Steve Czajkowski
Got The Blank Page Blues? Years ago this was an affliction I had... where to start.
The headline was always my first priority. No wonder I was stumped!
Research (I know, it implies effort) will get you pumping out ideas, phrases and metaphors certain to capture the mind and wallets of your prospects. Use Google when researching. Your competition is where I’d start.... then go deeper and harder than they do.
Knowing your ideal clients mixed in with your research and you’ll improve your results 10 fold.
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Submitted by Paul Parkin
Start jotting down interesting phrases and ideas when you're reading. Go through them from time to time. And you'll find your thoughts flowing smoothly once you get to writing.
I recommend the good old pen and notebook for this. Somehow you internalize better that way. And your repertoire of words increases exponentially.
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Submitted by Mayukhi Chakravarty
Create a customer avatar in your head.
That is, a vivid mental picture of your ideal customer. Get as specific as possible in your visualisation of them. Then, once you go to write, write with your avatar in the forefront of your mind. This is a powerful way to ensure you are writing for the customer, not the business.
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Submitted by Danielle Underwood
When translating languages, don't translate words, translate ideas.
What does the original person want to say or convey? Who are they writing for or conveying it to? How can you express it in a form that is faithful to the original meaning, natural in the target language and appropriate for the target audience?
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Submitted by Richard Mort
The Rule of 3 lends a wonderful rhythm to your copy. One always seems lonely and two is awkward. When in doubt, three is your magic number.
Short enough to be interesting, yet long enough to make a powerful impact.
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Submitted by Rachel Friedlander
Give a shit.
If you really, truly care about the problems you’re solving you end up understanding your reader in such an intimate, personal way. And your copy (which is really their words most of the time), cannot help but resonate.
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Submitted by Simon Ford
When writing an ad/email/landing page/physical mail, etc... features DO sell if your market is used to hearing other companies promise the same benefits as you.
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Submitted by Zac Garside
When you create that space between each line, it segments each thought and allows you to see how each sentence stands when read alone.
It’s also useful for when you re-read your copy aloud because it’s less clunky.
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Submitted by Eli Joseph
When you experience writer’s block, just bark, meow, or make a funny sound to jolt your current state and get your whole body functioning again.
Sounds strange — and it is — but it works.
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Submitted by Emmanuel Musa E
When writing copy, use simple everyday English. Avoid unnecessary buzzwords.
When you do this, most intelligent readers won't feel insulted... and the less informed readers will understand your message.
Win-win.
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Submitted by Dammy Azeez
I can spend all day struggling to find the perfect words.
As soon as my head hits the pillow? It’s like a thesaurus up in there.
My tip: keep a bedtime thoughts journal next to your bed. Too many times I’ve repeated my words of wisdom over and over again not wanting to turn on the light — to then immediately forget them in the morning.
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Submitted by Eppie Shepherd
Always refine your writing, and keep it as concise as possible. Don’t stop after your first draft.
You have to keep editing.
You have to be 'cull' to be kind!
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Submitted by Liz Bates
Whitespace is key.
It gives the reader a chance to pause, to relax, and to soak in all the information.
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Submitted by Joseph McMullen
No matter how good your copy is, people won't read it if they can't read it.
Make sure it's big enough in emails, lead magnets and (especially) website copy!
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Submitted by Karen F
Favorite tactic for developing tone of voice guidelines: creating a super detailed, highly visual fictional character to help new writers get into brand character before writing a single piece of content.
How does she act?
What does she look like?
Is she in a mood right now?
Accompany with visuals and playlists too. This makes her feel even more real.
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Submitted by Isabel Jarnstrom
Think of who your target client is and put “Dear so-and-so” (only use an actual name) before you start writing your copy. Not only will it help you stay focused on who you’re writing to, but it’ll also help you keep your copy more conversational.
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Submitted by Jennifer Hickerson
Use YOU more than using I/we because your customers matter first before you. They don't want to listen to what you've accomplished; instead, they would like to know what you can do for them.
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Submitted by MD. Shoriful Islam
Here's a quick tip: Read.
Immersing yourself in good writing is one of the best things you can do to become a better writer.
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Submitted by Scott Frothingham
Day #3 (of 9)
Simple, 111-word copywriting tip:
“Passive-proof” your copy 👇
Because nothing deflates strong, confident writing quite like passive voice.
Better to use active voice instead, whenever possible.
Active voice means the subject of the sentence is doing the action rather than receiving it. For example:
👌 Active voice: “Sasha drove the car.”
❌ Passive voice: “The car was driven by Sasha.”
See the difference?
Passive voice sounds stuffy, not to mention inefficient. You can do better.
You can “passive-proof” your copy in 3 steps...
Step 1: press CTRL-F.
Step 2: search for the word “by”.
This will highlight sentences in your copy where the subject‘s *receiving* the action.
Step 3: make the subject *do* the action.
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Submitted by Eddie Shleyner
The fewer the adjectives and adverbs in your sentence, the stronger your message.
Use as few adjectives and adverbs as possible.
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Submitted by Augustine O. Ojeh
A simple rule that helps me: write it perfectly, beautifully — then cut it in half.
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Submitted by Tim Roan
Fewer words slaps harder.
Cut down the number words to the bare minimum without distorting the message.
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Submitted by Augustine O. Ojeh
Yes, there is "power in the pause" as I call it.
The space literally allows us to take a breath and absorb the words. Without the space, we would literally run out of breath. White space is as effective as the words themselves. They go hand in hand.
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Submitted by Ali Chambers
Curiosity, excitement, and engagement are intertwined.
Provide just enough information to drive the reader in your desired direction. Don’t provide more than enough. Don’t provide less than enough. Find the equilibrium amount of details.
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Submitted by Augustine O. Ojeh
Don’t do all the thinking for the readers. Allow them to use their imagination, too. Your copy resonates when it stirs thoughts, simple obvious questions, and awe.
That said, make sure your sentences don’t trigger conflicting questions.
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Submitted by Augustine O. Ojeh
When copywriting, use simple, very easy to comprehend vocabularies/words.
Nobody has time to check the dictionary when reading your copy.
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Submitted by Joshua Dabo
Write… anything. Then rewrite it so every word in what you wrote is either a one- or two-syllable word. (Syllable is the only 3-syllable word in that sentence.)
It will keep your writing clear, simple.
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Submitted by Steve Lance
Include the most important benefit of your product in the first line of your copy.
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Submitted by Shaniese Alston
Do not write web copy in a vacuum.
Insist on seeing the wireframes before you begin.
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Submitted by Nancy Slome
My tip is to write when you are feeling your freshest.
Never tackle a project when you're feeling tired, unfocused, or stressed. I love to get my deepest writing completed first thing in the morning - before checking emails, before reviewing my daily to-do's, even before my first cup of coffee!
This also sets a great tone for the rest of the workday.
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Submitted by Emily Rae Schutte
Research first.
Write second.
Edit third.
Don't try to do too much at once.
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Submitted by Camille Trent
Start with verbs.
Make a list of active, two syllable verbs. The verbs need to have a great sound (when you say them aloud) as well as a pertinent meaning. Then write down all words that connect you to product. Go through the list and edit out anything that makes a "bump" or pause in your intake of data.
The remaining words will generate copy.
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Submitted by Marie Chambers
I think the first five bars of Beethoven's 5th Symp — the actual sheet music — shows complete silence.
He wrote it so that when the music starts, there's no music.
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Submitted by Steve Czajkowski
Write like a maniac. Stop.
Incubate for a day or 2.
Come back. Edit like a lunatic.
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Submitted by Cain Lewis
Read everything out loud. Everything. (And properly out loud, not whispering to yourself. Embrace the crazy.)
Honestly, so much poor copywriting could be improved by this one simple trick. You can intuitively hear rhythm.
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Submitted by Ettie Holland
Avoid long sentences with too many prepositions.
If your sentence has more than two prepositions, break it into different sentences. It gives flow to the reading. Helps with comprehension, too.
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Submitted by Henna Malik
Using frequent white spaces in copywriting also creates a ‘psychological room’ for the reader’s breathing, and feels natural.
Just like when we talk our breathing creates micro pauses.
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Submitted by Aneta Heinz
Technical or complicated terms are a strict no.
They slow down reading and readers may end up skipping these words or worse yet, only skimming through the copy.
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Submitted by Uthara Shabeer
Do not “back into” sentences...
Bad: When I woke after a restful night of sleep I got dressed and went to the gym.
Better: I had a great workout at the gym, in part because I slept eight hours last night.
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Submitted by Christoph Trappe
Every word is distinct. There are nuances in the words you pick. Had I written "select" at the end of that last line, it would’ve communicated something different.
Word choice matters.
Subtleties are what separate one audience from another.
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Submitted by Tommy Walker
For long form writing: Get someone else to read it.
Then ask "If only 20% got to stay, what part would it be?"
Followed by "If you had to get rid of 20%, what would it be?"
What you're left with is clarity on the core idea and what fluff needs to be cut.
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Submitted by Stewart Hillhouse
95% of the use of the word 'that' can be removed from your copy.
Review and remove, and you'll deliver sharper, punchier copy.
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Submitted by Diana Loppolo
Include personal anecdotes and examples to explain a complex idea.
It builds rapport with the reader.
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Submitted by Bhavya Sharma
Spend 1/3 of your time researching.
Spend 1/3 of your time first-drafting.
Spend 1/3 of your time editing.
There's a reason why this old adage still rings true: "I"m sorry I wrote you a long letter. I didn't have time to write a shorter one."
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Submitted by Stephan Mathys
Day #4 (of 9)
Simple, 81-word copywriting tip:
Open with “Imagine...” or “Remember...” or “Picture this...” 👇
These are trigger words.
They let The Reader know, consciously or otherwise, a story is coming (which is a good thing because we’re all hardwired to pay attention to narrative).
The word “Imagine” at the beginning of a sentence is like the title sequence of a show.
It’s there to prime you with anticipation.
It’s there to put you into a mood.
Plus it’s hard to hear “imagine” and not start imagining.
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Submitted by Eddie Shleyner
Be judicious with grammar rules. Some are important, some are not.
No one cares if you use an em dash or semicolon correctly, but if you end a sentence with a preposition there's probably a better way to put it. Use more periods than apostrophes.
Pay attention to flow, not necessarily *correct* punctuation.
And, to content marketers everywhere, I hereby give you permission to begin a sentence with 'and.'
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Submitted by Brooklin Nash
In US English you write “realize” but in British English the preferred spelling is “realise” — and same for many other words. The “z” option is allowable too so may not be picked up by spell check, which can lead to inconsistencies.
For consistency, particularly if you are localising something from the US version, you can ‘Find and replace’ “iz” for “is” (checking each one, NEVER replace all!) and “yz” for “ys” if you use words like analyse, paralyse etc.
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Submitted by Denise Atkins
Step 1: Press CTRL-F
Step 2: Search for the word "was"
Step 3: Flip the structure so that the subject performs the verb
❌The primary topic that was discussed in class revolved around gender equality.
👌The class primarily discussed the topic of gender equality.
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Submitted by Celeste Pouliot
If you find writing tough, speak your copy (like a podcast!) then get it transcribed to repurpose any way you like.
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Submitted by Lynsay Gould
Emphasizing with bold, italics, colours etc. is great if done in moderation.
Too many fonts, sizes and colours and you lose the reader. If everything is different, nothing is different.
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Submitted by Irit Levi
Put yourself in the reader's shoes.
Your audience may be educated and capable but it doesn't mean they want to read complex copy. Decent content is straightforward and easy to read. Keep it simple!
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Submitted by Dom Murray
Jot down all that attractive and engaging one-liners and phrases running through my mind about the project.
I don't worry if it doesn't fit in the website design or if it sounds too cheesy. I get it all out of my system messily on the page first! And then as I write the copy, I pick up pieces and words from it to make my copy sound interactive and casual. Works like a charm for headings, sub-headings, and CTAs.
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Submitted by Lakshmi Padmanaban
Serve your sentence’s meat first (even if that means going against traditional grammar rules).
Ex: Change "Our mission at [company name] is to provide affordable childcare to low-income families." to "Affordable childcare for low-income families."
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Submitted by Tony Rubinstein
If you're a freelancer, get half your fee up front.
Doesn't matter how well you write if you don't get paid.
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Submitted by Meyer Baron
Remember: it’s not about you.
People aren’t interested in your brand (sorry) — they’re interested in what your brand can do for them.
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Submitted by Katie Palmer
I use the "If so, then what?" question to convert features into benefits and results.
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Submitted by Navin Israni
I use text boxes and other features of text to draw the reader's attention to the most salient points.
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Submitted by Jessica DeShetler
When possible, end your
lines at a point which makes
your audience read the next one.
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Submitted by Raitis Gocentas
Study your craft.
It's hard to get good at something if you don't know what good is and the commitment you gotta make to get there.
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Submitted by Scott Frothingham
David Ogilvy said “Limit your opening paragraph to a maximum of eleven words.”
A great tip from a legend.
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Submitted by Paul Giacalone
Vary the length of your sentences.
Short sentences are snappy and engaging.
Whereas longer sentences are perfect for descriptions or more formal text. Mix it up. By varying your sentence structure, you’re guaranteed to capture and keep your audiences attention for longer.
Variety is the spice of life.
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Submitted by Josh King
When writing about something complicated, ask yourself if your grandmother would understand. Or call her and explain it to her and see where the hang ups are. That’s where you’ll ultimately need to simplify your writing.
Advertising content that is overly complicated will not be read, and the product will not be bought. Simplify, simplify, simplify!
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Submitted by Monica Dziak
Most readers simply scan the copy before they decide if it's worth reading. And a formatted copy just makes it that much easier for them.
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Submitted by Arlene Mathew
In-text formatting is definitely a great way to highlight important points. And while using font sizing as a differentiator is also a popular technique in graphic design, it isn't usually an available option for plain-text posts like these. What I like to do is to use spacing and paragraph length for this exact purpose.
Like this. It captures attention.
This is all about using negative space. That's why block quotes stand out so well in publications and books. That and the combination of font sizing and in-text formatting is a sure-fire way to use contrast.
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Submitted by Jack Chan
No matter the type of copy you’re writing, think of someone you know (friend, relative, acquaintance) that most closely resembles your target market and write TO them. You can even call them to get their thoughts.
And later, you can thank them when the right words flow!
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Submitted by Chris Pawar
Think like you are about to buy the product/service.
Edit like you are almost there to the cart
Proofread like you would if it had bank account details.
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Submitted by Dhwani Sangani
Write at a 6th grade level. Your readers are smart, but their brains are busy. Make them burn the fewest calories possible.
NO: Fully optimized for the enterprise marketplace, our award-winning conversion mechanism transforms your product into customizable deliverables to satisfy your end user.
YES: Your customers will love the toast you make in our restaurant-grade toaster.
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Submitted by Jon Vann Sprecher
Too much bolding, underlining, and too many emojis confuse the reader.
Too much contrast = no contrast.
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Submitted by Greg Carmichael
One of the most important copywriting tools I have been fortunate to learn is spacing.
The late Gary Halbert emphasized this often. When you create spacing in your writing, it encourages the reader to keep reading and helps maintain the flow...
Like this.
As opposed to having blocks of super-long paragraphs containing both relevant and irrelevant information you want your reader to consume because you are excited and want him/her to be as excited as you are. This will ultimately make the reader struggle to understand, lose interest, and most likely stop reading. Like this one.
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Submitted by Benny Motalem
Type "copywriting tips" into YouTube.
Then go to the FILTER and request SHORT videos sorted by VIEW COUNT. The cream rises to the top as they say, some excellent content available there.
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Submitted by Richard Mort
Avoid repeating the same word too often by using a thesaurus or the synonym finder in MS Word (right-click the word for this option).
Do this while you edit so you stay in the writing flow.
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Submitted by Juliana Hahn
“That” is usually a throwaway word. Strike it from copy for a cleaner and more direct message.
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Submitted by Carol Anderson Raym
Day #5 (of 9)
Simple, 119-word copywriting tip:
The word “because” is a persuasion heuristic 👇
A heuristic is like a shortcut our brains use to avoid critical thinking.
Basically, heuristics exist because people generally hate thinking. It’s hard. So we evolved to avoid it whenever possible.
But I digress.
The word “because” signals you’re about to hear a justification — a reason why — which has been proven to make folks comply (Google: “Xerox experiment”).
"A well-known principle of human behavior says that when we ask someone to do us a favor, we will be more successful if we provide a reason,” writes Robert Cialdini in his book, Influence.
“People simply like to have reasons for what they do.”
So give your Reader a reason. Use because.
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Submitted by Eddie Shleyner
Marketers: Looking to get the attention of a specific type of person? Open by calling out their role (did it work?)
Hard to ignore a post written specifically for you.
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Submitted by Stewart Hillhouse
The two questions on my mind when I do funnel reviews for clients are:
So what?
Who cares?
If ya don't answer these clearly and QUICKLY, you've lost your reader.
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Submitted by Meg Harris
Put your copy through the classic “so what?” filter.
Write the answer. Do it again. Refine the original to make sure you truly articulated the value for the reader.
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Submitted by Cody Lee
Got an important somethin' somethin' you wanna highlight? End your text with a P.S.
Your goal is to hook your reader off the bat, but they may end up scanning the rest of your content... especially if it's a bit lengthy.
So add this simple "but wait! there's more!" attention-grabber and ensure your Reader doesn't miss out on that important CTA or announcement.
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Submitted by Kaleena Stroud
Read your copy backwards for spelling/grammar mistakes.
This helps your brain focus on individual words rather than clumping them into sentences.
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Submitted by Erik Davidek
You can also configure the grammar checker in Microsoft Word to check for passive voice.
Just go to File > Options > Proofing > Grammar and Refinements settings (under “Clarity”).
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Submitted by Denise Atkins
Workshop your headlines.
I try to come up with 10 - 20 different versions of my headlines before settling on one. It gets all the crappy headlines out of my head and allows me to combine ideas I never would have connected before.
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Submitted by Jason Vana
Don't write “we seek to help…” or “we look to improve…”
“We help...” and “we improve...” are much stronger and more confident!
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Submitted by Denise Atkins
Whenever possible, address the reader directly (e.g., “you”). This goes for all copy including website texts, blog posts, social media captions, etc.
It makes any text more relatable and engaging.
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Submitted by Juliana Hahn
Using the active voice is so important because people relate better to products, stories they can relate to. As soon as we start reading the text, we create images in our heads. And the passive voice shuts this down.
Hemingway Editor is a useful tool for identifying passive voice.
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Submitted by Tjasa Pele
Read your copy out loud.
You will notice tense changes, misspellings, and grammatical mistakes more than just proofreading the copy.
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Submitted by Jason Vana
Cut your copy down. I learned this trick in college — if your copy seems long, go through each paragraph and try to cut the copy down by 25-50% while retaining the message.
It helped me to become a much more concise writer.
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Submitted by Jason Vana
Another good one to CTRL+F for is the word "is" — then you'll get all those "is run" "is built" & "is founded" 's which can often be replaced with single, stronger verbs.
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Submitted by Orit Wittenberg
A tip from 30 years of writing is to read your work out loud.
Your ears will hear things that need fixing; things your eyes didn’t see.
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Submitted by David Allison
Cut the first 500 words of your blog post.
It usually takes that long to "ramp up" and get to the good stuff.
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Submitted by Tommy Walker
My high school English teachers always told me to never start a sentence with a conjunction. But you can. And you should.* If you want to.
*Sometimes.
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Submitted by Elvin Matos
Install a screen reader. It has helped me tremendously.
Hearing the words out loud helps me catch mistakes I otherwise would’ve missed as well as things that just don’t come across as I intended.
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Submitted by Meisha Bochicchio
Ask a friend which words you're known for overusing when speaking.
Hit CTRL + F again and type it in…
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Submitted by Ryan Stevens
Use the simplest word, unless you are 100% certain your audience knows the terminology.
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Submitted by Will Brennan
Copywriters need to learn the difference between a 'product's features' and a 'product's story'.
Instead of harping about the features, try and understand the transformation curve of the customer buying your product. How does your product help them? How do your features make them a real life hero? Write your copy around the product story. Talk about what your client's life will be like once he buys and consumes the product.
Sell them the story and not the product.
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Submitted by Parthiva Mewawala
While writing copy, imagine that you're writing a newspaper advertisement where every character is chargeable.
You'll write only what is necessary and end up with brilliant, snappy copy.
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Submitted by Kanishka Agarwal
Start with paper, not a computer.
Write by hand, then type it. You'll edit as you go.
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Submitted by Josh Spilker
Ditch stuffy formalities by swapping nouns for verbs, e.g. 'Submit your application' becomes 'Apply'.
Shorter, snappier, and more human — hurrah!
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Submitted by Katie Palmer
When editing, change the font of your work.
It helps you look at your writing with “fresh” eyes and is especially handy when you don’t have time to take a break between writing and editing.
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Submitted by Elizabeth McCumber
Grammarly and Yoast are great tools.
They'll highlight any passive voice so you can change it. Best of all, they've "trained" me to write in the active voice.
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Submitted by Jennifer Phillips April
Ctrl + F, search for 'that.' Delete when possible. Sometimes you can't delete 'that' but it usually is a filler word.
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Submitted by Scott McKinney
Find out your buyers' main channel of communication (visual, auditory, or kinesthetic). Look beyond the words they're saying, even how they consume information. You'll build rapport more easily if you can mirror their most dominant communication channel in your marketing.
For instance, for more auditory people, reach out to them with a personalized audio, podcast, etc.
For more visual learners, videos are a must-have.
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Submitted by Noelina Rissman
To "passive-proof" your writing, there’s also this free tool called Hemingway Editor, which will automatically spot adverbs, complex sentences, and every instance of passive voice.
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Submitted by David Schokkaert
There's an interesting explanation I read recently about why one shouldn't use passive voice. It's not because of how it sounds, which can be subjective, but because of how we (humans) process words.
The moment we start hearing words, images appear in our head. So, when you hear "Sasha drove the car", in your head, you "see" a person first, and then that he's in the car. But when you hear "the car was driven by Sasha", you first see a car that's driving on its own, and only then place a person into that image. In which case, it will take your brain longer to make sense of what's being said.
This is, of course, a simple example. But the principles alway remain the same: the words we hear create images. The faster those images make sense, the easier we can understand the words. And active voice will create those images faster than passive.
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Submitted by Gill Andrews
Day #6 (of 9)
Simple, 96-word copywriting tip:
Use the 2nd person 👇
There are a few ways to express point of view in writing:
1st person: “I” + “We”
2nd person: “You”
3rd person: “He” + “She” + “It” + “They”
When writing copy, 2nd person is the most engaging PoV because it’s the most personal to The Reader.
Pronouns like “you” and “your” will help people see themselves in your copy, in the story you’re selling.
Great copy should speak to The Reader. It should be an intimate, personal experience.
Not an easy thing to do — but using the 2nd person will make it easier.
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Submitted by Eddie Shleyner
Don’t use complicated technical language that baffles people. Keep it simple and relatable.
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Submitted by Jessica Hodkinson
Stay humble; stay curious.
There are timeless concepts that work consistently, but how they are expressed can change over time or by audience. Become best friends with testing and obsess over your prospect.
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Submitted by Cody Lee
Make sure your intended reader has a “this is for me” moment—early.
Invite your target audience in or call them out in the headline/opening paragraph.
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Submitted by Cody Lee
When writing copy, use trigger words like:
“You”
“Because”
“Instantly”
“Free”
“Now”
These power words are proven to drive people to take action.
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Submitted by Rashmi Agrawal
Rhyming is more important than you think.
Take this key quote from the OJ Simpson trial of the century: “If the gloves don’t fit, you must acquit!”
Rhyming makes your phrasing catchier, improves its staying power and makes your arguments and your copy more persuasive.
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Submitted by Richard Mort
Saying something incredulous or counterintuitive, then following it up with a "Let me explain."
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Submitted by Vincent Rendoni
This is probably the simplest tip out there and hopefully, everyone puts it in action already: use the language your audience will understand.
Feature terms and industry buzzwords are great, but try to remember that your customer could come from anywhere — and your goal is to make sure they understand what you do and why they need your product.
Anything that gets in the way of that must be dropped.
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Submitted by Sanjana Balaraman
Cut the adverbs.
You’re not a high school student trying to get to a certain word quota anymore.
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Submitted by Rebecca Posner
At some point in your writing, break the rules of how you are supposed to write.
On LinkedIn, that looks like occasionally breaking the classic 3 line hook, heavy emphasis on whitespace, and other staples of LinkedIn posts.
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Submitted by Tyler Burch
"Never write like you're the best person in the room, but write like your reader is."
Too often, we trip over finding clever copy or jargon-laden explanations to launch us into "thought leadership" stardom. But that copy doesn't do anything for us.
Writing like your audience matters most humbles our (at times) verbose styles and keeps us focused on our readers.
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Submitted by Shelby Rogers
Consider the outcome that your recipient would like, rather than the product/service you want to sell.
If you're selling hammers, picture hooks, frames and piano wire — sell the resulting picture on the wall.
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Submitted by Steve Fair
I trapped my finger in a door this morning, so apols for typos bcs it's red as a beetroot and weeping all over my keyboard as I type!
My problem with IMAGINE is that it's a cliche. Also: bad style.
When we read how Buffy the Vampire Slayer screamed at the vampire LOUDLY, we wonder how else she might have screamed. Here's an unnecessary qualifier that gets in the way of what's being shown. Turns out the loudness is inherent in the scream, and the gooey blood now oozing from my finger is merely something I invited you to imagine without clubbing you over the head with the word IMAGINE to make a point. If you like, I can squeeze my finger and see what happens next.
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Submitted by Steve W.
Use strong command words like “can” and “will” and “do”.
Avoid passive words like “may” and “could” and “perhaps”.
Strong command words give your copy confidence.
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Submitted by Emily Eudall
Attribution is the least interesting part of the sentence, put it at the end.
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Submitted by Kendall Walters
Use active voice as much as possible to make the reader feel part of what you're writing.
Passive voice just sounds, well, passive.
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Submitted by Heideli Loubser
Use en dashes/em dashes — in place of commas — when possible.
Makes the copy easier to read.
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Submitted by Xuen Lee
Read your writing out loud.
It’s the fastest and easiest way to check if your copy is actually natural and conversational.
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Submitted by Kendall Walters
Use persuasive words like “convenient” and “indispensable” and “money-saving” to create a sense of need in your reader's mind.
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Submitted by Shelly Steffler
Always start your page or email at your reader's stage of awareness.
If all your reader knows is she's got a problem, lead with that problem. If she's already started looking into solutions, lead with what sets your solution apart from those others. If she already knows about your solution, lead with testimonials and proof of awesomeness. If she's ready to buy, focus on features and benefits (and mostly just try to get out of the way).
This applies to the whole funnel, too.
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Submitted by Meg Harris
Take at least 24 hours before you come back to your content piece to edit it or write draft no 2.
This way you have cleared all the clutter from your brain regarding the topic and you come back with clarity, new perspective and are in a state of flow.
Personally, I like to meditate for 5 mins before I start writing again. It works wonders!
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Submitted by Meena Azzollini
Lead with empathy.
Know who you are writing to, know what they are feeling, and know how to meet them where they are.
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Submitted by Pat Timmons
Before sending an email, I transcribe what I'm going to say into my phone. I imagine that someone is sitting with me and I'm having a conversation.
How we write is not how we talk.
I've found this to be effective.
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Submitted by Tom Short
Don’t be afraid of personal pronouns!
“You” is one of the best words you can use as a copywriter.
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Submitted by Sarah Sehgal
When writing CTA buttons, don't just leave it at "Submit" or "Sign up".
Instead, try to rephrase it as if it came from the person themselves.
For example: "Yes, sign me up" or "Yes, save me a seat." Sounds much more persuasive.
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Submitted by Benjamin Steele
Delete 'that'.
Not every instance, obviously. But consider if it's serving meaning, or just adding a syllable to trip over. "I think that we should..." vs. "I think we should..." — nothing lost, punch gained.
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Submitted by Katie Palmer
Before you write anything, interview your target audience (via a mass survey or a 1-on-1 phone call).
This way you can be sure your copy speaks to them in words they use and understand at a glance.
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Submitted by Erin Balsa
Day #7 (of 9)
Simple, 122-word copywriting tip:
Count your adverbs, then halve the number 👇
Stephen King wrote: “The road to hell is paved with adverbs.”
Pretty harsh, right? That’s because King knows adverbs are quite effective at weakening your writing.
If you want to arrest The Reader, replace most of your weak adverb-verb combos with a single punchy verb (or adjective).
For example, I’d replace:
“Pretty harsh, right?” with “Brutal, right?”
“...adverbs are quite effective at weakening your writing.” with “...adverbs will sabotage your writing.”
”VeryGoodCopy” with... well, no. That one can stay.
Which reminds me: use adverbs sparingly but don’t be draconian.
If you love the way it sounds — if it makes the copy more natural or readable or “on brand” — keep it.
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Submitted by Eddie Shleyner
I love using "we" when writing tutorials or guides.
It makes me feel like I'm having a conversation instead of dishing out instructions.
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Submitted by Ojaokomo Nathan
Simplify! Remove unnecessary words.
They can cause confusion and you want your copy to be as clear as possible.
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Submitted by Christine Quinn
Your first draft should always be the clearest, simplest form of messaging that gets your point across so anyone can understand it.
Edit for tone and style after.
Remember KISS? Still applies as a copywriter.
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Submitted by Valerie Shore
Always, always, always use 2nd person.
It helps people connect with you more!
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Submitted by Jason Vana
Assume your audience isn't interested in what you have to say.
Then make them change their mind.
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Submitted by Phil McFadden
Vary sentence length, and edit for sentence rhythm.
It’s a subtle way of projecting your voice.
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Submitted by David McCarthy
Being a good copywriter means you must be able to write in a voice other than your own.
You're not selling you. You're selling your client. So you have to be able to sound like them.
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Submitted by Aimee Rhodd
What are you selling?
Whenever someone has trouble with copy, I tell them to look at the product. Pull out an element of the product – an interesting fact that's just slightly out of plain sight.
For Ogilvy it was "at 60 miles per hour the loudest noise in this new Rolls Royce comes from the electric clock." For us at ActiveCampaign, we switched "easy to set up" to "You can set up this automation in 66 seconds (we tested it)."
First understand your market. But once you understand your market, the product tells you how to sell it.
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Submitted by Benyamin Elias
I often think to myself that philosophers were the original copywriters; rhetoric their copywriting techniques, the courtroom and public theatres their landing pages and ads.
So maybe we can steal from them.
Anaphora: repeating the start of a sentence for effect.
VeryGoodCopy teaches persuasion.
VeryGoodCopy teaches copywriting.
VeryGoodCopy is a continuous course of copywriting teachings, delivered one morsel at a time.
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Submitted by Sam Holston
If you begin your copy with a question, it will automatically trigger the reader’s brain to search for a response, which is engaging on its face.
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Submitted by Nithya S
Use the active voice.
Active: You see this.
Passive: This is seen.
Using the active voice puts your product/service and your reader into the story. The passive voice puts them to sleep... or worse.
Try this: If you can add “by zombies” to the end of the majority of your sentences, and they still make sense (except, you know, for the undead), you’ve got a passive problem.
The active voice helps keep your copy moving and your reader engaged.
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Submitted by Jean Matthias Breheney
The brain is a causality machine. It likes reasons BECAUSE they create causal links. The xerox study is crazy.
93% people said yes when given even a nonsensical because.
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Submitted by Sam Holston
I love starting an article or email with a question — it draws the reader right in.
Then, I use a lot of bucket brigades or what Joe Sugarman calls "seeds of curiosity" to keep people engaged.
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Submitted by Corina Leslie
Regardless of what you’re selling, your product or service must address a core emotion.
As may have heard, people buy with emotion but justify it with logic.
These emotions are what triggers your audience to take the desired action.
Before your launch your next ad, think about the deep-lying emotions your target audience desires.
Then address it in your ad and watch your sales skyrocket.
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Submitted by Adewale Adeyemi
If the stakes are low, the word "because" doesn't have to be followed by a related or logical explanation
For example: “Can I go first because I have to make copies?” 👉 Of course you have to make copies, it's why we're all queuing! But it’s still effective).
On the other hand, if the stakes are high, "because" has to be followed by a logical explanation 👉 Because the brain will start to analyse the situation.
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Submitted by Mathieu Osada
Remember that exercise in school where you cut a story to a page, then a paragraph, then a sentence, then a line?
Great practise for making sure every single word earns its place!
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Submitted by Katie Palmer
Pretend you are the reader. Apply WIIFM or as I like to call it, the WSIGAS principle:
‘What’s In It For Me?’ or ‘Why Should I Give A Sh*t?’
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Submitted by Eve Vickerson
Include calls-to-action wherever you think your prospects will be ready to click them.
This might be at the end of the page or above the fold, but it might be somewhere else. Don't assume. Test!
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Submitted by Alice Cuninghame
Even a beautifully written piece won’t get read if the title isn’t click-worthy.
Spend 80% of your time (according to David Olgivy) crafting your headline!
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Submitted by Neha Sharma
Write like the message is meant for a specific person (within your target audience) to read.
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Submitted by Laurie K
The science says people are more willing to do you a favor if you provide a reason.
For example, you're standing in a line and you're in a hurry, so instead of saying: "Excuse me, could you let me first, I'm in a hurry?"
You say: "Excuse me, could you let me go first because I'm in a hurry — my bank is closing in an hour and unless I print this right now, I won't make it."
The latter will get you a “Yes” more often than the former.
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Submitted by Slobodan Grujic
Find all your adverbs and ask yourself if you actually need them.
See what I did there? 'Actually' can be removed in that tip.
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Submitted by Robin Stokes
Go easy on the eyes.
What would you rather read: 2 sentences or a big chunk of 5-6 plastered together?
Marketing research tells us when it comes to reading emails, blogs, online articles, and the like, consumers prefer short and sweet messaging.
Use white space to your advantage (the blank area around text/images).
Keep it short, keep it sweet. And please. Go easy on the eyes!
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Submitted by Matt Snyder
We must keep in mind that our prospects are not stupid.
No matter how much we can improve our copy, if our product doesn't solve the customer's problem, even if they bought it the first time, they won't buy from us again.
Develop a product that solves our customer's problem, before we start marketing to them.
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Submitted by Aik Teck Yan
Often overlooked but your copy should be free from errors.
Because errors are distracting. They snap your readers' attention away from the goal of your copy.
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Submitted by Ojaokomo Nathan
In writing, showing paints an image for the reader in her mind’s eye.
Telling is simply stating information.
Telling: “I used to have a garden. It was a very peaceful hobby that I enjoyed.”
Showing: “I once had a garden. I can remember the smell of the turned earth, the plump shapes of bulbs held in the hands, fullness, the dry rustle of seeds through the fingers. Time could pass more swiftly that way....from a distance it looks like peace.” (Excerpt from The Handmaid’s Tale)
In copywriting, the rules are no different. If you reveal everything and leave nothing to the imagination, you’re losing an opportunity to engage with your reader.
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Submitted by Mashia Stilt
Copywriting tip for those who ramble: how to keep it short and sweet.
Start by outlining what needs to be said. Plot out your "What" "Who" "Why" "How" "Where"
Then get all the words out, and don't worry about redundancy!
When you're all typed out, read through it and edit:
highlight redundant sentences
shorten overly descriptive paragraphs
identify info thats better described with images
take out assumptions your audience will naturally make
improve your topic transitions to keep them reading
This is how to turn 1000 words into 100.
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Submitted by Keegan Brown
Don't let people tell you that you can't start a sentence with 'Because' (or 'And', for that matter).
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Submitted by Rory Ffoulkes
Day #8 (of 9)
Short, 89-word copywriting tip:
Rewrite your call-to-action as a call-to-VALUE 👇
Almost every piece of copy you write should have a call-to-action, or CTA, at the end. (It will tell your prospect what to do next.)
Good CTAs are clear and concise, bold and visible. And if you can make them communicate benefits, good.
Imagine, for example, a travel website. A typical CTA button might read: “Book Now!”
But here’s a better CTA: “Book Today & Fly Away!”
Let your prospects see themselves in the action, and they’ll be more likely to take it.
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Submitted by Eddie Shleyner
Use first person language in your CTA, especially on the action button or link: "Yes, I'm ready to…” or “Send me my free..." etc.
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Submitted by Timothy “Sully” Sullivan
Take the reader by the hand by appealing to their lazy side.
Action words often imply a lot of effort (e.g., “Start” + “Buy” + “Sign up”), whereas “Take me” or “Show me.” imply you don’t actually have to do much.
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Submitted by Kim Edwards-Buarque
Begin with the end in mind, meaning decide on the action that you want people to take when they finish reading your copy.
So, if it's a landing page, decide what you want people to do when they reach the bottom. Do you want them to drop their email in or do you want them to download an e-book?
When you start writing this way, you'll notice that it is easier to get through the copy because there is only one objective that you'd like to achieve. Similarly, having multiple CTAs throughout the copy can be confusing. Stay consistent throughout the copy and you'll have better results.
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Submitted by Karthik Subramanian
Keep testing your assumptions. I have been surprised by some CTRs on various tests I ran in the last few months.
For example, "See How" is a strong performer for various campaigns I ran, despite being less descriptive and benefit oriented as your suggested CTAs.
It all comes back to context. Use the right type of CTA based on the content it comes with (static or dynamic ad, landing page, web page, email campaign...).
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Submitted by Johan Abadie
Also check if "you" is singular or plural.
Determine whether you are writing for one person or more than one person. If you are writing in an American dialect, for more than one person, change "you" to "y'all," "you guys," "youse guys," or "y'ins."
Then close the search box.
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Submitted by Steve Czajkowski
Use bucket brigades. "What's that?" you ask. Let's break it down.
A bucket brigade is a simple copywriting technique to keep people engaged from start to finish.
Because here's the thing: Some people can get bored reading long-form content. Now, you'll see it's easy to keep them hooked.
Just do this: Every few paragraphs, use a short, conversational sentence that persuades the reader to keep going.
Like this:
“Most people don't do this…”
“You won't believe this next point…”
“Why? Nobody knows, but here's one thing for sure:”
If you do it well, you'll make people curious — and get people to read to the bottom.
And here's why that matters: That's where your call-to-value is waiting.
Use Bucket Brigades to Get Buckets of New Leads.
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Submitted by Christopher John Haughey
When you get done writing your sales page, pull up your “Find on this page” search bar (⌘ + F on a Mac/Control + F on Windows) and type the word: you.
Take note of the number of times it appears on the page. Then scroll through each section and see it highlighted throughout.
If there are any sections without it, think about ways to add in ways to speak to the customer.
If you’re not sure how many times it should be included, do the same thing on multiple sales pages by big brands and use that as a reference point.
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Submitted by Skyler Reeves
CTA text is "Get Value!" or "Get Cost + Profit Margin sustained by Demand = Price!"
Everybody wants to click that!
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Submitted by Steve Czajkowski
Beware of acronyms and initialisms* ...many are company- or industry-related terms that aren’t familiar to your readers.
And, often the same letters have different meanings.
CIA ...Central Intelligence Agency OR Culinary Institute of America?
DOA ...Dead on arrival OR Date of application?
Back to the question Shrutika Joshi suggests you ask yourself: Is this understandable?
Answer: probably not if you inserted too many acronyms into the copy.
*Acronyms are read as words (e.g., ASAP, NASA)
Initialisms aren’t (e.g., FBI, TBD)
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Submitted by Norrie Feinblatt
Criticize your copy! Ask yourself, “is this understandable?” Or, “will someone even read this?”
When you criticize your copy as a reader, you get various fresh perspectives. This way, you keep innovating while writing.
Edit, edit, and edit some more. Rewrite it (if required). At the end, you must be completely satisfied with your copy.
Kill your creation to give it a new, better life!
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Submitted by Shrutika Joshi
Specifics sell.
You can say, "Get accurate online fraud prevention fast", or you can make it much more real and enticing to the reader by saying, "Get AI-accurate online fraud prevention in <1 second."
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Submitted by Rachel Grunbaum
Powerful, intriguing, meaningful words: Start with them. Draw readers in.
Save the "thanks" for later.
Often, those initial words are all readers can see (i.e., of a post, in a preview window, on a phone screen).
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Submitted by Norrie Feinblatt
When you begin writing anything — be it a blog, email, LinkedIn post — always say the most important thing upfront, right at the top. Never hold it back until the end. This way people can decide whether they'd like to read it or not.
At the same time, it prompts them to take an action based on what you write. This is called the 'inverted pyramid' approach where the most vital part of the writing is laid out on top of the cake like a cherry, before you move downwards towards the creamy portion (that adds to the waistline).
I have tested it many times and it works every time!
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Submitted by Karthik Subramanian
Unsure if an adverb in your copy deserves to stay?
If it informs, it can stay. If it reinforces, it should go.
For example: “She smiled sadly.” (informs a contrast) vs. “She smiled happily” (reinforces happiness which smiling already conveys).
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Submitted by Teesha Thomas
Data > Feelings.
Test two subject lines on a small sample size and redirect the remainder of your group to the winning test.
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Submitted by Marchy Comer
My tip: Get back to the grade school basics of Who, What, Where, When, and Why.
These questions are the building blocks for your whole brand!
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Submitted by Jules Costa
Optimize for unexpectedness. People are hardwired to seek novelty. The more unexpected your content is, the more it'll grab their attention.
Combining two or more things that don't belong together or challenging assumptions could be two examples.
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Submitted by Zhenya Zerkalenkov
Swap nouns for verbs.
Business writing is crawling with nouns (or nominalisations) and they weigh everything down. They tend to sit with the passive voice, which makes for a monstrous combo.
“Decide” instead of “decision”. “Consider” instead of “consideration”. Stuff like that.
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Submitted by Rachael Bull
Keep practising your brevity.
Revisit your texts and ask yourself, "Can I keep the meaning and use fewer words?"
Working within character limits (such as writing tweets, for instance) helps bring your attention to your character/word count and helps you practice saying more with less.
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Submitted by Michael Freason
My transition from copywriting to UX writing taught me: Get comfortable killing your darlings.
Sometimes your catchiest option won’t carry. Punchy lines drive compelling copy — but they’ve got to stick the landing.
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Submitted by Alana Fialkoff
Condense copy by putting the section on Twitter and whittle away at the excess.
Twitter's character count will tell you when you've done enough!
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Submitted by Jessie Taylor
There’s this great quote: "Adverbs are a sign you used the wrong verb."
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Submitted by Malka Winner
Use “The Diamond Structure” in your copy.
Basically, beginnings and endings count more than middles. Make the most of these high-traffic locations: use them to distil your message or highlight what readers need to remember.
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Submitted by Maaike Klein
To hook readers, don't tell them what they already know in an introduction.
For example, if I google "How To Write Good Copy", I already know why good copy is important. So why waste an introduction telling me that it boosts sales?
Instead, tell me how informative content with a conversational style will boost sales.
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Submitted by Alice Draper
Replace "i"s and "we"s in your copy with "you"s as much as possible.
And watch the focus of your copy shift to your audience.
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Submitted by Philip Kuehnen
Write it bad then write it better.
Basically, get the words down on the page first to get the ball rolling, then you can go back and spend time improving it. This helps me start without any fussing or self doubt.
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Submitted by Mollie Woolnough-Rai
A tool for cutting adverbs is to replace the adverb and verb it supports with a different verb.
Change 'he walked softly' to 'he tiptoed.'
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Submitted by Celeste Pouliot
Take the time to edit.
Read copy out loud to make sure it sounds conversational.
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Submitted by Carole Reinert
Turn prepositional phrases and relative pronouns into (compound) adjectives for snappier, more interesting sentences.
For example: "The girl with the blonde hair who is talking loudly" vs. "The loud-talking, blond-haired girl" — less clunky, right?
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Submitted by Katie Palmer
Day #9 (of 9)
Simple, 154-word copywriting tip:
Live now 👇
Darren Brown, the master illusionist, is a craftsman. I love this quote from him:
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“When we live for our goals, we forget to live now.
“When you listen to a piece of music, you don’t just skip to the end because that’s when it all comes together. You don’t read the last chapter of a book because it’s the climax.
“In life, we're obsessed with endings…
“And so we forget that maybe life is more like a piece of music — and we’re supposed to be dancing.”
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Copywriting is an incredibly deep, rich discipline. You can study it forever, which, in fact, is what you’re supposed to do.
You’re not supposed to master copywriting in 9 days or 9 weeks or even 9 years. It’s a process, a craft, a dance — and it never really ends.
And that can be a beautiful thing…
But only if you let yourself live now, each day.
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Submitted by Eddie Shleyner
Questions make a copy more interactive and pleasant.
They anticipate the readers' necessities and gently invite them to continue. A tactful question can reflect an authentic interest in solving the readers' problems, whereas a direct one can generate more impact.
Questions should not overload a copy but support and complement the Calls To Action in it to engage the audience.
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Submitted by Gabriel Bello
Writing copy is all about empathy.
When you are writing, think about someone you know that could be the target customer and just write for him/her. No judging. If you don’t like that person in real life maybe this is your chance to understand their point.
It’s great for your copy and for your soul.
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Submitted by Elena de Francisco
Effective copywriting is not about you or the company you're writing for.
It's about the reader/customer and how your product/service can help them reach their desired state.
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Submitted by Makena Walsh
Your headline has only 1 objective - to get users to stop scrolling and start reading/watching your content. To achieve this, the headline needs to do one of the following:
1. Evoke curiosity
2. Inspire thought
3. Confirm a suspicion your target market has
4. Make a bold promise
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Submitted by Martina Brodar
Learn to stand up for your ideas, always have reasoning behind them and believe in what you write.
Otherwise, neither clients nor readers will do it.
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Submitted by Victoria Dencheva
Change your pacing.
Short sentences are catchy and easy to digest. But a whole paragraph of short sentences quickly becomes boring. Varying your sentence length develops a good reading rhythm and a more engaging piece.
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Submitted by Katrina Dalao
Never lie.
In marketing, copywriting generally sends an audience to the next step of their journey. Your copy can be bang on amazing. But, if there’s a disconnect between the step they are on and the step they end up at, then everyone’s wasted their time.
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Submitted by Clive Bartlett
Become your customer.
For example, if you're selling coffee pots, go through the process of buying a coffee pot. If the descriptions aren't helpful or are vague, you could improve on description text by including information that would have been helpful on your journey to purchase a coffee pot.
Note your personal user experience (positive & negative), and try to implement solutions to the negative parts (buying experience pains) while incorporating positive parts — or even try to improve them!
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Submitted by Kevin Foley
If you are starting out and someone asks you to rattle off a quick written piece – feel comfortable in asking “Why the urgency?”
Creating good, effective, copy – that meets objectives – takes time. And, for any over-thinkers like myself, many rounds of editing. As with the spoken word, the written word is so powerful. Give it the time, and attention, it deserves.
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Submitted by Clive Bartlett
Sometimes choosing the perfect quote by someone else gives your copy more power.
Quotes can inspire ideas and add authority. To quote Marlene Dietrich, “I love quotations because it is a joy to find thoughts one might have, beautifully expressed with much authority by someone recognized wiser than oneself.”
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Submitted by Carol Anderson Raym
Switch device when proofing.
So if you wrote your draft on your laptop, sleep on it, then read it on your phone, on a tablet, or print it out.
The brain gets used to familiar surroundings. so you start missing things. Using a different device changes things up and resets your brain. You’ll be amazed at the stuff you pick up.
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Submitted by Andre Spiteri
Get off the poster.
You want people to relate to something. Not admire you, not think how amazing you are, not feel envious of how great you had it. You want people to understand and feel that they can go through that lesson with you, or have that experience through you, or be warned because of what you did.
Don't write to get a "thank you for changing my life" message in your inbox.
Write something that is you and do it so others can share that experience with you and relate to it all along the process of the narrative.
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Submitted by Sabrina Popescu
Before publishing, take the time to read your written piece. Read it as many times as you need to.
Does it sound right? Does it flow? Are there any areas that trip you up, twist your tongue, or simply turn your written piece into a ‘Snorey Story’? If so, strip out any unnecessary words. Keeping things simple in a fast-paced world helps the audience quickly digest content. Keeps them engaged. And helps them quickly decide if the content’s for them.
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Submitted by Clive Bartlett
Follow the rule of 6/60 – Flesch-Kincaid 6 / Flesch Reading Ease 60. Or at least have this as a benchmark. These scores translate to how easy it is to digest your content. Generally speaking, the higher the Reading Ease score, then the easier it is to read.
You can check the readability score of your work in Microsoft Word. To add the function go to Word (top menu) > preferences > spelling and grammar and check the box ‘show readability statistics’.
Then, highlight your text in Word, go to tools (top menu) > spelling and grammar. And a floating pallet appears on your screen. At the bottom of this pallet are the readability scores. It also shows if you are using any passive language. Try keeping this to a minimum.
General rule: reduce the number of syllables in your words, and words in your sentences, and you’ll keep the readability score at a good level.
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Submitted by Clive Bartlett
Give the dough ample time to rise.
Factor in enough time to let your copy sit overnight before you move on. A day or two is even better. When you review it from a place of distance you gain the ability to revise dispassionately.
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Submitted Ellen Mowrer
Always use The Rule of One:
Remember that only one idea is going to get transferred through your copy, so center your copy around one main concept!
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Submitted by Martina Brodar
Use the power of the PS.
The PS or postscript actually gets the most attention because it's the last thing people read in your message and it sticks with them. Some studies have even shown that it's often also the first thing people read.
This could be due to the "laziness" of our brain which sees the P.S. as a short and easy piece to read compared to the bigger message. So get your PS right.
PS: Don't overdo it. Focus on the value you bring to the reader first, and not what you want him to read.
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Submitted by Jelle Van Medegael
Frame positive.
The human brain has trouble processing negative statements. Suppose I say "don't think about your big toe." In order to process that statement, you need to create a picture of your big toe in order to understand what NOT to think about.
Similarly in business. If I write copy that says "there are no additional fees," you're now thinking about fees. If I write "we don't share your personal data with anyone," you're now thinking about me sharing your personal data.
What DO you want people to think about? What pictures do you want in your reader's minds? Say that.
"Clear, transparent pricing."
"We protect your data as if it were our own."
One final fun one - instead of "Do not hesitate to contact me with any questions," which has people think about hesitating - "Feel comfortable contacting me at any time with any questions you might have."
Positive framing. Feels good. For all of us.
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Submitted by Drew Delaware
Leave space for relief.
Whether eye relief or for the brain to finish the idea.
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Submitted by Michael Koory
Use the "so what?" test when you review your pain poking, headlines, benefits, etc.
As in "This blanket, woven from spider's web fiber, is like no other blanket." Sounds cool at first but so what about spider's web makes me want to buy it.
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Submitted by Gregory Anne Cox
Each and every line of your copy should keep your readers sliding down a slippery slide all the way to the end and the process starts with a great headline.
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Submitted by Adewale Adeyemi
Always create URGENCY or SCARCITY in your copy.
There should always be a reason for your readers to take action ASAP.
Simply put, it means saying something that makes your readers feel they need to act NOW, without delay. You do this by planting FOMO, or the Fear Of Missing Out. This could come in the form of a:
short deadline
price increase
limited number of entries
When you create Urgency or Scarcity in your copy... people are TRIGGERED to act fast and take action on your offer.
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Submitted by Timilehin Tunde
When copywriting, present features as benefits.
For example, a PC with keyboard backlight might look like this:
Features: The new laptop TY871 comes with a keyboard backlight.
Benefits: The new laptop TY871 comes with a keyboard backlight, which enables you to type in the dark, so you can work at night.
Customers are more interested in the benefits the features can offer them.
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Submitted by Hameed Salawu
Here's an alternative idea. Every sentence you write should be a call to action.
Your headline should be like a big candy red button that says, "Push me. Oh, yes. Click me. Yes. Yes." If you haven't said something that triggers action the second they read that headline, you are not doing your job.
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Submitted by Steve Czajkowski
Keep in mind- you are writing to ONE person- a single individual. Not hundreds or thousands in a mass, undefined audience. All copy and content is consumed on an individual basis.
Keep it one-to-one and conversational.
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Submitted by Timothy “Sully” Sullivan
You need more connection in your copy. Connect your past experience with the reader’s current problem they are trying to solve. Even if you don't have a direct exact problem like they have, you'll have something similar you can use to relate.
Increased empathy, increased trust, and ultimately increased authority.
Of course, if you're writing for a client, use their past experiences.
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Submitted by Cuyler Callahan
It’s important you write your sales letter based on one single idea: The Big Idea.
This idea should be unique, easy to understand, and target an emotion.
Don’t bring up different ideas. Build up one single, amazing and different idea.
That will serve as the core of your copy.
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Submitted by Tamilore Sonaike
My tip is what is called the reverse case study.
Put yourself in the shoes of your ideal customer sometime in the future. Write a brief case study from their perspective describing how your products/services helped add value to their lives. What problems and frustrations did it overcome?
Then, turn the past tense around and you have a great starting point for brainstorming some customer-focused copy. I like using this when writing proposals.
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Submitted by Peter Sharpe
Call to actions should be fluid in nature.
Avoid commitment heavy words like "Buy” or “Register” or “Sign up" — and replace with frictionless words that add value to your headline (and product), like "Experience” or “Get Started” or “Begin".
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Submitted by Anoop Sudhakaran
Done!
Thanks so much for being here.
I hope you enjoyed this Micro-Course — and learned something along the way.
Yours for VeryGoodCopy,
Less is more and keep it simple.
If you can't explain a message simply enough for a 6-year old to understand, you don't understand it sufficiently yourself.
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Submitted by Richard Mort